Grass_Hopper 18263 Report post Posted November 29, 2009 When I saw you the first time, every thing was chill... No need to lie, no strings attached... I've took care of you as you took care of me... And then the games have started: Lies regarding your job, Your wife, And even other SPs... Forgetting the most important, PLEASURE. Now that your wonderful mask is broken, You hide, Ashamed of your own lies... Did you forgot that I'm there for you, and not the other way around? Filling your needs of PASSION, SEDUCTION, INTIMACY? Why do you lie to me? Who am I to judge you? Depute, mayor, or janitor, YOU ARE THE ONE FEEDING ME... So please, don't lie... You'll just hurt me... 8 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest S**a*Q Report post Posted November 30, 2009 Hey girl, just wanted to say that I like this, no matter what it is. I rank it as poetry, as it instills feelings in the reader. :) Good job putting emotion into words!!! Makes me want to write about what we do now. ;) When I saw you the first time, every thing was chill... No need to lie, no strings attached... I've took care of you as you took care of me... And then the games have started: Lies regarding your job, Your wife, And even other SPs... Forgetting the most important, PLEASURE. Now that your wonderful mask is broken, You hide, Ashamed of your own lies... Did you forgot that I'm there for you, and not the other way around? Filling your needs of PASSION, SEDUCTION, INTIMACY? Why do you lie to me? Who am I to judge you? Depute, mayor, or janitor, YOU ARE THE ONE FEEDING ME... So please, don't lie... You'll just hurt me... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VedaSloan 119179 Report post Posted November 30, 2009 We should start a thread devoted to stuff we (the lovely ladies of CERB) have written! That was a nice one Sabrina! It's so true also. I can relate to where that came from! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
geo007 203 Report post Posted November 30, 2009 Lovely, Grasshopper. You are such a tender person at times which truly touches me. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coachg 388 Report post Posted November 30, 2009 Very nice grasshopper....you sound like a truly amazing lady....would love to get to meet you someday. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pjrd 324 Report post Posted December 3, 2009 yes that was very nice. I`m glad Sarrah has started a thread on the stuff that comes out of the ladies heads. It`s great:motion: PJ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JoyfulC 132299 Report post Posted May 19, 2010 Thank you, Grasshopper -- you brightened my morning! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Old Dog 179138 Report post Posted May 20, 2010 There is no doubt that there is talent there!!!!! Much better than any of the poetry I attempt... that all seem to need a rhyme for Nantucket..... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Grass_Hopper 18263 Report post Posted May 21, 2010 Broken I've read about you Been told about you But I could'nt believe it... Was it true? Did you really broke into my intimacy Finding my deepests secrets, Telling everybody about me? I trusted you from all my heart and guts, And you have teared everything appart... Why would you do that? I would have told you if asked! Now, I feel broken, Not trusting anyone Because at the end, The only thing you've broken Is me, my beloved friend... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
